Jasmine Hart

I voted Ariel. I love her! After that it would be Jasmine, then Mulan, then Belle, then Pocahontas. I don't like the others much. They're...I don't know...a bit too girly?

Hi Ryan, Welcome to YWS! Hope you like it here. Are you far into the novel? "Chapter after chapter" by Heather Sellers is very good if you get stuck. Jas

Hi Neko, welcome to YWS! Hope you find the site useful and enjoyable. Jas

It is inevitable. At some point, multiple points, every writer will experience doubt. Either someone will say something derogatory and discouraging, you will be rejected for the twentieth time, or ...

April 7th I apologise for this one...I found the form very difficult. Anacreontics For Once For once, the moon does not sneer as you pull your jacket near, and reach ...

I don't think the one from the fifth is anything special. It started off well, but then the imagery weakend, and it dragged the poem down. I'd cut; "Darling, please, ...

April 6th Sapphic Ode Ode To My Miserable Goldfish *submitting*

I'd love one on this, if you get round to it; I'm happy to return the favor, so pm me or post in my thread here if you get round ...

I love the playgroud flows well and the imagery is great. I think that, in the first poem, you're being overly restricted by the form. It's forcing you to twist ...

These are great Kit. Three is my favourite, but I also really like one. My only quibble is in poem four, when you write; "with his adoration and adulation of ...

Thanks Kit! Lol. No worries. Three pages are better than nothing! April 4th Ballad Pure and Sexless Streets What pure and sexless streets we walk In Ireland, fine and green, ...

April 1st-Terza Rima Absent/Return You're not poking your head around my door to tell me to put my books away. (Please stop me if you've heard this one before.) I'm ...

I have six written which I'll hopefully put up after this lecture.

You don't suck at all, silly Jared!

I really enjoyed this, as usual. I agree that the first two lines are too much. I think they're more telling than showing. I'd try to paint more of a ...